Thrilagon's GM app

Junior Member Posts : 1 Join date : 2009-10-23

Name : Hii i'm jorbin meddour

In-Game Name : my name is Thrilagon

Age : i'm 13 years old

Country currently residing in and Timezone : belguim gmt+1 i think

Describe Yourself, Briefly : i'm big ; brown hair i do soccer

Give 5 positive things about you : i help many people i don't hack cuz that sucks

How active are you : normal very active but my own pc is broken and my brothers pc is a bit laggy

Will you abuse your powers as a GM : NO cuz normal ''people'' must earn there own stuff or someting

Do you have any maplestory experience? if yes, please provide private server's experience too : i was gm in ElektroMS or something but the server is down

Do you have any game master experience? if yes please provide the server being a gm in, and the level of the gm : like i sayed i was gm in ElektroMS

How would you rate your English in a scale of 1 to 10 : 7-8/10

Subject: Re: Thrilagon's GM app Sun Oct 25, 2009 5:40 pm

Your English is at LEAST 5.

I don't know what about Kay, but your dead to me.
(Green texts in the quote are comments by me)

jorbin wrote:: Name : Hii i'm jorbin meddour
Make it more formal, "Jorbin Meddour" without the Hii i'm...

In-Game Name : my name is Thrilagon
Formal please, "Thrilagon". Thats all

Age : i'm 13 years old
AGAIN, FORMAL LANGUAGE WILL GET YOU MORE CHANCES! "13"

Country currently residing in and Timezone : belguim gmt+1 i think
... FORMAL DUDE! "Belgium, GMT +1" - NO "i think".

Describe Yourself, Briefly : i'm big ; brown hair i do soccer
Heres the correction :
"I'm big, I got brown hair and I play soccer."

Give 5 positive things about you : i help many people i don't hack cuz that sucks
Heres the correction :
"I help many people, I don't hack because it stinks."

How active are you : normal very active but my own pc is broken and my brothers pc is a bit laggy
Heres the correction :
"Usually/Normally I'm very active, But my computer got broken and my brother's computer is kind of laggy..."

Will you abuse your powers as a GM : NO cuz normal ''people'' must earn there own stuff or someting
Heres the correction :
"NO, Because normal "people" must earn they're own stuff in the same way."
AND NOT "or something".

Do you have any maplestory experience? if yes, please provide private server's experience too : i was gm in ElektroMS or something but the server is down
Heres the correction :
"I was a GM once, I don't remember the name, I think it was ElektroMS, Although It's down."

Do you have any game master experience? if yes please provide the server being a gm in, and the level of the gm : like i sayed i was gm in ElektroMS
BIG MASSIVE NOOBISH SPELLING MISTAKE "sayed".
Heres the correction :
"Like I said, I was a GM in ElektroMS."

How would you rate your English in a scale of 1 to 10 : 7-8/10
BWAHAH! IT'S BARELY 6!